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In this story, I’m doing something completely different. I am going to be writing about a new character named Jennifer Carter from the Criminal Case game from the Google Play Store. During the game Jennifer becomes victim to Trish Colleti because Jennifer was flirting too much with Trish’s boyfriend Raphael so Trish decides to get rid of Jennifer permanently. For references, I’ll be using MattJohn1992 Jennifer Carter comic and PitchingAce88 YouTube channel Criminal Case game (also he has played every Criminal Case game so I would recommend checking out his channel.) What does Trish have planned for Jennifer? Will Trish accomplish her task or will she get caught and get arrested by the police? We’ll See!!!


One night Jennifer and Raphael were hanging out the whole day and Jennifer offered to help Raphael who was currently living in a homeless camp move forward and find something better to do with his life. However, Trish noticed Jennifer flirting with her boyfriend as they were walking down the street and heard their whole conversation. Trish had warned Jennifer to stay away from her boyfriend, but Jennifer chose to ignore her so Trish decides to take matters into her own hands. So she hired men to kidnap Jennifer so Trish can get rid of her permanently.


Jennifer: Raphael I can see that you are unhappy; I can help you get out of the homeless camp so you can move on with your life and be happy.


Raphael: How? I have nowhere to go!


Jennifer: My mom has friends that can help you let me talk to her and I’m sure she will say yes.


Raphael: Okay, I’ll give it a shot!


Trish: (Notices Jennifer and Raphael) what is she doing with Raphael? (Gets closer to listen)


Jennifer: Great, I’ll talk to mom tonight and I’ll meet you at our usual spot to tell you the news!


Raphael: Okay, I’ll see you tomorrow!


Trish: Oh, no you won’t Jennifer because you are not taking my boyfriend away from me!


(Once Jennifer and Raphael separate Trish meets with a lot of men dressed in black in a dark alley. Trish pays them to kidnap Jennifer and tie her up to get rid of her.)


(Big Strong Men laughing in a dark alley)


Trish: Hello, gentlemen I have an offer for all of you that you might find interesting!


Man 1: Oh, and what could a little girl like you have to offer us?


Trish: (Takes out a lot of cash and shows it to them)


(All the men nod at each other)


Man 2: Hmm, what did you have in mind?


Trish: I need to get rid of a certain girl who is trying to take my boyfriend away from me and I want all of you to grab her and bring her to me!


Man 3: Sounds easy enough! Where is this girl?


Trish: She’s headed south, probably going back home. So I need you grab her quick and bring her to me!


Man 4: Got it! Consider it done!


(All the men leave to search for Jennifer)


Trish: I warned you Jennifer, now I guess I have to punish you!


Meanwhile, the men have found Jennifer passing by a big hill so they spring into action, grab Jennifer, knock her down to the floor and start to shackle her wrists and ankles in chains and tie her chest and legs with strong rope. Jennifer struggles to free herself but the men were too fast and too strong. Jennifer tried to scream for help until Trish shows up and gags Jennifer. After that, Trish reveals her plan to Jennifer and what she plans on doing with her. Jennifer struggles in vain to get free but her binds and gag were too tight that she could barely move an inch or make any sound. Afterwards, the men knock Jennifer unconscious with a club and carry her into a big black car and drive to the edge of a cliff.


Jennifer: (sighs happily) Yes, with my help I will be with Raphael for the rest of my life and everything will be perfect for both of us!


Man 1: Now!!


Man 2: Grab her!


Man 3: Get over here girl!


Jennifer: Hey, let me go!


Man 4: Not a chance! Yarrgh!!


Jennifer: Aaaahhh!! Ugggghhhh!!


Man 1: Hold her!!


Jennifer: Let me go!


Trish: You wish!


Jennifer: (sees Trish) It’s you! Trish please help me!


Trish: (Takes out a big role of duck tape and gags Jennifer) I don’t think so!


(Trish wrapped tape over Jennifer’s mouth, around her head, and under her hair)


Jennifer: GHMMMMPH!!!


Trish: Hold Her Very Tightly!


Jennifer: GHMMMMMMPHFF!!!


(Men shackle Jennifer’s wrists and ankles in chains)


(CHINK, CHINK)


Man 1: Hold her, hold her!


Jennifer: Mmmmph!! MMmmphh! Mmmmmmpphh! Hmmmmmphff!!


Trish: (Gags Jennifer again with a big white handkerchief) Be quiet you brat!


Jennifer: MMMMMMPHFF!!!


Man 2: Hold still!


Jennifer: Mmmmphh! MMmmphh!


(They removed Jennifer’s shoes and socks and attach a big steel ball and chain to Jennifer’s ankles) (CHINK)


Jennifer: Mmmm….mmmmm…..mmmm…mmm….mmm!


Trish: Hello, Jennifer Carter!


Jennifer: (Looks up at Trish)


Trish: I’m sorry Jennifer, but I cannot allow it!


Jennifer: Hmmm??


Trish: I told you to stay away from Raphael, but you wouldn’t listen! I have strictly forbidden you to stay away from my boyfriend, but now it looks like I need to banish you by making you disappear forever where no one especially not Raphael will see you ever again!


Trish: And your welcome Jennifer (laughs evilly)


Jennifer: Ghmmmmmmphff! Hmmmmff! Hnnmmph!


Trish: Alright men, make sure she is never found!


Jennifer: Hnnmmph! Mmmmph!


Man 1: (Knocks Jennifer unconscious with a club)


(THCK)


Jennifer: Mmmrrphm….mmmmph….hmmmm…..mmmm….


Trish: Put her in the car and lets’ go before anyone sees!


Man 2: (Brings a big black van)


(The rest of the men carry Jennifer inside the car, strap her in the back seat, and drive away)


2 hours later the men carry Jennifer out of the car and prepare to throw her over the edge. Jennifer starts to regain consciousness as Trish bids farewell to Jennifer. After that, the men throw Jennifer over the cliff. However, one of the men had accidently dropped a key that unlocks Jennifer’s shackles and a knife into the water without knowing. Jennifer falls into the water and continues to struggle in vain to free herself from her bondage and prevent herself from sinking any deeper, but she continues to sink deeper and deeper until she hits the ground. Jennifer sees a key and a knife falling down to her and tries to reach it, she pushes herself with all her might to reach it but the steel ball gets stuck on a sand dune, but Jennifer continues to push herself until she starts losing oxygen, then everything goes black and she collapses on the ground.


(The men in black arrive at the edge of the cliff and carry Jennifer to the edge as Jennifer

Starts to wake up.)


Trish: Were here! Grab her and take her to the edge of the cliff!


Man 1: Whenever you’re ready! Throw the girl over!


Jennifer: Hmmm….mmmmph…


Trish: Goodbye Jennifer Carter! Throw her over!


Jennifer: MMmmmmphh….


(They throw Jennifer into the ocean; Jennifer falls into the water and struggles in vain to free herself)


Jennifer: Mmmph, mmmph, mmmph, mmmph, mmmph, mmmph!


(Hits the ground, and sees the key and knife)


(Jennifer struggles to reach the key and knife, but the steel ball gets stuck in a sand dune)


Jennifer: Mmmph, mmmph, mmmph, mmmph, mmmph! Mmmph, mmmph, mmmmm……..


(Jennifer fall unconscious due to loss of oxygen)


(Back at the top of the cliff)


Trish: Well gentlemen, looks like our work here are done!


Man 1: You better not let anyone find out about this or else you will be our next victim!


Trish: (scared) Don’t worry, no one will ever find out about this!


Man 2: Good!


(After that, the men leave and return to their hideout)


The next morning, Jennifer’s mom filed a police report about her daughter gone missing. Detectives Ace and Jones immediately spring into action. They talk to all witnesses and eventually find Jennifer underwater who died from drowning.


Police Operator: Hello, what is your emergency?


Mrs. Carter: Please, help me! My daughter is missing and I don’t know where she is!


Police Operator: When was the last time you saw her?


Mrs. Carter: Yesterday, but she never came back!


Police Operator: Okay, we’ll start investigating right away!


Mrs. Carter: Thank you!


(Meanwhile at Grimsbury Police Station Detectives Ace and Jones are assigned to the case.)


Detective Jones: Ace, we’ve got a new case, a girl named Jennifer Carter has mysteriously disappeared!


Detective Ace: Then let’s get started! First, let’s find our suspects!


Detective Jones: Right!


(Both Detectives find and talk to Jennifer’s mom, Trish, and Raphael)


Detective Jones: Mrs. Carter when was the last time you saw your daughter?


Mrs. Carter: Just yesterday, she said that she was going to see her friend Raphael! He lives in a homeless camp not too far from here!


Detective Jones: Thank you!


Detective Ace: Let’s go have a talk with Raphael!


(They meet with Raphael)


Detective Jones: Raphael, When did you last see Jennifer?


Raphael: Last night, she wanted to help me so that I could leave the homeless camp, but I haven’t seen her today and we promised that we’d meet again!


Detective Jones: Is there anyone else you know that has been in contact with Jennifer?


Raphael: My girlfriend Trish knows her as well; she works at the butcher shop with her dad down the street!


Detective Jones: Thank you for the information!


Detective Ace: Let’s talk to Trish!


(They arrive at the butcher shop and talk to Trish)


Detective Jones: Hello, Ms. Trish have you seen Ms. Jennifer?


Trish: No, I hardly knew her! She was always a flirt and liked to go swimming a lot!


Detective Jones: Hmm, thank you for your time!


Detective Ace: She seemed really suspicious, let’s head down to the beach and we need our scuba gear!


Detective Jones: Right!


(They arrive at the beach, put on their scuba gear, and dive underwater where they immediately find Jennifer floating underwater all drowned they cut Jennifer’s binds and take her to shore.)


Detective Jones: She doesn’t have any pulse!


Detective Ace: She died from drowning, let’s take her to the autopsy Grace can tell us more!


(2 hours later after autopsy)


Ace and Jones find all the clues and with the help from their friends back at the police station they discover that Trish and the men in black were the ones who murdered Jennifer. Ace and Jones immediately arrest them and are taken to court. All the men are sentenced to life in prison without parole due to their back ground history. Trish is also sentenced to life in prison without parole and Raphael breaks up with Trish for good and vows to never forgive her for what she did to Jennifer.


Grace: I was able to find a couple of clues from your victim. Whoever did this has black hair and is wearing yellow clothes.


Alex: I also found something, due to the video cameras around the area I found out who the culprit is its Trish Colleti and she had some help by 4 men dressed in black.


Detective Jones: Then we have all the information we need!


Detective Ace: Let’s go make an arrest!


(The detectives take a swat team with them where they find and arrest all the men who helped Trish. Afterwards, both detectives go to arrest Trish and take them to court.)


Swat Officer: Hands Up!


Swat Officer 2: Get on the ground now!


Man 1: We did nothing wrong!


Detective Jones: The 4 of you are under arrest for the murder of Jennifer Carter!


Man 3: It was not our faults we were hired by a named Trish Colleti!


Detective Ace: Don’t worry; we are on our way to arrest your partner in crime!


(The swat team puts all 4 men in the swat team truck and drive back to the police station while Ace and Jones head to the butcher shop to arrest Trish.)


Trish’s Dad: Hello officers, how can I help you!


Detective Ace: We need to talk to your daughter Trish can you please call her?


Trish’s Dad: Sure, just a sec! (Calls Trish and she comes downstairs)


Trish: Hey dad, (sees the detectives) What’s going on?


Detective Ace: Trish Colleti, you are under arrest for the torture and murder of Jennifer Carter!


Trish: WHAT?


Detective Jones: Don’t try to deny it we have all the evidence we need that proves you murdered Jennifer Carter and we also found your accomplices.


Trish: Dad, dad you’re not going to let them arrest me are you?


Trish’s Dad: (sighs) They have proof Trish, how could you do such a terrible thing?


Trish: That girl was trying to take my boyfriend away from me, what I just supposed to let tat fly?


Detective Jones: Do you mean to tell us that you killed this girl over blind jealousy?


Trish: She Was A Brat! I Had To Teach Her To Behave! I Don’t Regret Nothing, Nothing! I’m Glad That She Is Gone!


Detective Ace: I think we heard enough! Trish Colleti you are under arrest anything you say will be used against you in a court at law!


(The Detectives handcuff Trish and take her away!)


(The court case)


Judge: Due to the history of these 4 men and due to the murder of Jennifer Carter I hereby sentence these 4 men to life in prison without parole under maximum security!


(Police Officers take all 4 men away)


Judge: As for you Ms. Colleti, for hiring 4 men to kidnap Ms. Carter, and for the brutal torture and murder of Jennifer Carter I hereby sentence you to life in prison without parole under psychiatric monitoring!


Trish: This is all Jennifer’s fault! She ruined my life!


Raphael: You ruined your own life!


Trish: Raphael? Jennifer was trying to take you away from me; I know I did the right thing!


Raphael: Wrong, you ruined my life! I already wanted to leave that homeless camp, but thanks to you, I’m now stuck their forever!


Trish: I could have helped you; after all you’re my boyfriend!


Raphael: Not anymore!


Trish: What!


Raphael: We Are Over Trish For Good! I Never Want To See Or Hear From You Ever Again; From Now On You Mean Nothing To Me!


Trish: You don’t mean that!


Raphael: I mean every word! A cold-blooded murdered like you doesn’t deserve to be loved!


(Leaves the Courtroom)


(Trish gets taken away by police officers and spends the rest of her life in prison)


With Jennifer’s case solved and Trish Colleti in prison for her crimes. After Jennifer’s funeral, Raphael continues to visit Jennifer in the cemetery and Detectives Ace and Jones help Raphael move forward into a better life.



The End

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In this story I'm going to tell how Ariel gets captured by Ursula's eels and what she plans on doing to Ariel and if anyone can save her before it's too late. For references, I plan on using Get Her Boys and Sea Spider Problems by Burnup19. Once upon a time under the sea in Atlantica, Ariel ventured into the dark cave she'd been led to in search of old antiques that she could take back to her grotto. During her search she came across a shadowy figure and followed it down a smaller side tunnel. As she went round a bend, she was momentarily blinded by a brilliant light. Suddenly, Ursula the sea witch appears from behind the light. As Ariel began to regain her composure, she was grabbed from behind. Flotsam and Jetsam wrapped themselves around Ariel tightly. Ariel tried to scream for help, but before she could speak, a coil wrapped around her mouth. Ariel was shocked to see that Flotsam and Jetsam had grown longer thinking perhaps it was a result of whatever that light was. As she struggled in their grasp, the sea witch spoke again. After that Ursula came out and planned to take Ariel away. For Ariel she planned to take her to the sea spider cave where they would tie and gag her up with their silk webbing.


(Ariel swims out of Atlantica and uses the map she found to search for new antiques for her grotto.)


Ariel – Hmm, this map leads out of Atlantica and into a dark cave! It doesn’t seem very far, I’ll go to the cave and return quickly before it gets dark.


(Ariel arrives at the dark cave)


Ariel – This is the place! I wonder what treasures I could find here! (Swims around)


(Meanwhile a few miles from the cave Ursula sees that Ariel has arrived and begins her plan to capture Ariel)


Ursula – (Laughing) Good, the princess is here! Now, I can put my plan into action! First, I will throw this potion in front of that mermaid that will blind her momentarily. Then, my pets you will grab the girl!


Flotsam and Jetsam – Yes, Ursula!


Ursula – Good, then let’s go!


(Ursula, Flotsam and Jetsam quietly get closer to Ariel without being seen, after that Ursula throws the potion on the ground and Flotsam and Jetsam grab Ariel)


Ursula – Now!


Ariel – What was that? (Screaming)

(A Bright light blinds Ariel)


Ursula - Get her boys!


Ariel - (gasp) (struggling) Let go of me!


(Ursula appears)


Ursula - Your search ends here, princess! but don't worry, I have something very special planned for you!


Ariel – (Struggles) Ursula?

Ariel Captured 5

Ursula - ha ha ha ha ha welcome princess, you have fallen right into my trap! Ariel - Let me g…Mmmppph….mmmmmph….MMmmmmph! Ursula – Never, I have special plans with you Flotsam and Jetsam bring her. Ariel - (Struggling) Mmmmphh….MMmmmmphhhh…. Ursula - My dear Ariel, I'm taking you to a very special place.


Ariel – Mmmmph….Mmmmmphh….mmmmmmmmph….. Ursula took her to the sea spider cave where she left Ariel there and the sea spiders came out and wrapped her up and took her inside their cave.


(They arrive at the sea spider cave)


Ursula – We’re here! I hope you have fun princess!


Ariel – Mmmmph…MMmmmmmmph…..


Ursula – Don’t worry, I’ll be back for you later! Boys, throw her in!


(Flotsam and Jetsam throw Ariel inside the sea spider cave) Ariel - (gasps) (screams while falling down the cave to the web) Ughh…


Ariel – Where? Where am I?


(Many sea spiders come out and start tying up Ariel in their webbing)


Ariel – (Gasps) Sea spiders (grunts while they start wrapping her) No, let me go!

Ariel Captured 2

(Ariel lifts her head to try to scream for help but one of the sea spiders gags her and drags her head back down.)


Ariel - Hel….mmmpphh….mmmpphh….mmmpphh…. Meanwhile back at Ursula's grotto Ursula was planning to send King Triton a message about that he has kidnapped his daughter and she won't release her if he gives Ursula his Trident. But Flounder and Sebastian who were looking for Ariel managed to hear everything outside of Ursula's Grotto and they raced back to Atlantica to tell King Trident when they told him he was shocked.


Flounder – Ariel?


Sebastian – Ariel, where are you?


Flounder – Where could she be?


Sebastian – I don’t know, but we have to find her fast!


(Flounder and Sebastian hear Ursula laughing and swim closer to her grotto)


Flounder – What’s that?


Sebastian – Sounds like the sea witch! Quick, let’s get closer!


(Flounder and Sebastian look inside through a small window to spy on Ursula) Ursula – (Laughing evilly) Now that I have that girl trapped I will send King Trident a message that I have captured his daughter and I will only release her if he gives me his Trident so I can rule all the oceans ha ha ha ha ha ha. Sebastian - Flounder quick we have to go tell the King. Flounder - Right let's go. Hold on Ariel, Help is on the way!

(Flounder and Sebastian swim back to Atlantica as fast as they can and tell King Triton what they heard.) Sebastian - Faster flounder faster. Flounder - Were almost their. Sebastian - Your Majesty, your Majesty we need to tell you something. Flounder (screams) – Ariel has been captured! King Triton - What? Flounder - Ursula sent her eels to lure Ariel out of the kingdom and they took her away. King Triton - Come we must go save my daughter! So they stormed out of the palace headed to Ursula's Grotto. Once they got there King Triton made Ursula tell him where Ariel is. Once she told him he got so mad that he zapped Ursula with his trident that killed her. After that, they went looking for Ariel which took them long time to find her because she was in an underground cave. Once they have found her King Triton destroyed all the spiders and Sebastian went down to cut Ariel free. King Triton - Ursula. Ursula - Welcome your highness. King Triton - What have you done to Ariel? Ursula - I took Ariel to the sea spider caves and I would only release her in exchange for your Trident. If not I will keep torturing her. King Triton – Never, you will never hurt anyone again!


(King Triton zaps Ursula with his Trident killing Ursula instantly) Ursula - aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh..........


Flounder – She’s gone! King Triton – Come, we have to go find Ariel. Back at the sea spider cave Ariel struggled to break free from the webbing, but her webbing and her gag was too tight and she couldn't break free. Then her father was calling out to find her and she tried to call for help, but only light mmmph’s were heard. When they reached the cave Sebastian heard her and then they saw her and King Triton destroyed all the sea spiders so Sebastian can go down and cut all of the webbing so Ariel can get free. Ariel - (grunts) mmmpphh, mmmpphh, mmmpphh, mmmpphh! King Triton – Ariel…..Ariel!!! Ariel - mmmpphh, mmmpphh, mmmpphh


(After a few hours of searching they arrived at the sea spider cave) Flounder - We made it to the cave! But where is Ariel? Ariel -mmmpphh, mmmpphh, mmmpphh Sebastian - Wait, I heard her she is somewhere in this cave. King Triton - Let's go! Sebastian - I heard her again she should be right down this hole................... King Triton – Ariel! Ariel -mmmpphh, mmmpphh, mmmpphh King Triton - Hold on Ariel!


(Triton kills all the sea spiders by blasting them with his trident)


King Triton – Sebastian, go release Ariel. Sebastian - Yes your Majesty, hang on Ariel I'll have you free in a second. Ariel - (gasps) Thanks Sebastian. King Triton - Ariel are you alright. Ariel - Yes I'm fine, but what about Ursula? King Triton - You don't need to worry about her she's done. I'm just glad that you are alright Ariel - Me too King Triton – Come, let's go home Ariel - Good idea!


The End

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A few hours had passed and Ariel has managed to sit up and tries to reach a sharp rock tile on the wall to cut the vines. Ariel manages to reach the rock tile and she starts to cut the vines once she is free she opens the bedroom door and tries to sneak out. Just as Ariel is about to reach the main door Flotsam grabs her and clamps his hand over Ariel’s mouth and both Flotsam and Jetsam drag Ariel back inside. As punishment for trying to run away Flotsam and Jetsam drag Ariel down to their dungeon like basement and throw her on the ground which causes Ariel’s wedding dress to get all dirty. Then, Flotsam and Jetsam rip parts of Ariel’s dress. After that Flotsam throws Ariel against the wall and chains Ariel’s hands above her head while Jetsam shackles Ariel’s ankles to a big ball and chain. Finally, Flotsam gags Ariel by stuffing a white cloth into her mouth and ties a white handkerchief tightly over Ariel’s mouth. After that, Flotsam and Jetsam leave Ariel alone in the basement and lock the door. Tears start to fall down Ariel’s face as she began to struggle but the chains were too thick and too strong to get free. (Hint: I had Ariel gagged and in chains exactly like SeriaBibi’s Ariel picture.)


Ariel’s mind: I need to get out of here and warn Eric. I can’t let him fall into Flotsam and Jetsam’s trap!


Ariel: Mmmphhh…mmmphh…Mmmmmph…..mmmmphhhh….


(Ariel sees a sharp rock tile and tries to stand in order to reach it)


Ariel’s mind: If I can reach that sharp ledge I can cut these vines and escape from this place!


Ariel: Mmmmmphhhh…Mmmmphh….Mmmmphh…MMmmmmphhh….


(Ariel manages to reach the sharp ledge and cuts the vines until she is free)


Ariel’s mind: (Almost there….got it!)


Ariel: (Whispers) I’m free! Now, I need to get out of here before Flotsam and Jetsam find out!


(Ariel quickly and quietly opens the door, walks down stairs and almost reaches the door, but is suddenly grabbed by Flotsam and Jetsam where Flotsam clamps his hand over Ariel's mouth and they both drag her back in.)


Ariel: I’m almost there… the door is right if I can just reach….. (Gasps) MMpphhh…


Flotsam: Going somewhere, princess!


Jetsam: We told you we weren’t going to let you escape! Now, stop struggling!


Ariel: MMMphhh….MMMpphhh….


Flotsam: Stop struggling, we have the perfect place for you!


Jetsam: (Opens a trapdoor leading to their dungeon like basement) welcome to your new room, my dear!


Ariel: Mmmmphhh…Mmmphhh…


Flotsam: For trying to run away from us princess I think you deserve to be punished! Don’t you think so Jetsam!


Jetsam: I agree, let’s teach this girl a valuable lesson!


Ariel: Mmmmphhh…


(Flotsam and Jetsam throw Ariel to the ground which causes her wedding dress to get completely dirty, then Flotsam rips off Ariel’s sleeves and bodice while Jetsam rips Ariel’s wedding skirt.)


Flotsam and Jetsam: Yarrgh!


Ariel: Aaah!! UUHH!


Flotsam: You won’t need this princess! (Rips Ariel’s sleeves off)


Ariel: NO!


Flotsam: And you definitely won’t need this? (Rips Ariel’s bodice off)


Ariel: No, stop!


Jetsam: You won’t need this bothering you either! (Rips Ariel’s wedding skirt)


Ariel: Please, stop!


Flotsam: But we are having so much fun with you, and we are just getting started! (Throws Ariel against the wall)


Ariel: Aaah! UGH! (Falls to the ground again)


Flotsam: (Forces Ariel to stand and shackles her arms above her head and gags her) Stand up princess!


Ariel: (Groans)


(CHINK, CHINK)


Flotsam: (Forces Ariel’s mouth open by stuffing a cloth into her mouth and ties a tight cloth gag over her mouth)


Ariel: Mmmphhh! Mmmphhhh….mmmmmph….


Jetsam: (Shackles Ariel’s legs to a big steel ball and chain)


(CHINK, CHINK)


Ariel: Mmmmphh….mmmph….


Flotsam: I think we are done here!


Jetsam: Yes, I think the princess has learned her lesson!


Flotsam: Goodbye for now, princess!


Jetsam: We’ll be back for you later!

Ariel 2

Ariel: Mmmmph….MMmmmmmmph….


Flotsam and Jetsam: (Laugh as the head back upstairs and lock the door)


Ariel: (Tears start to fall from her face and she continues to struggle)

Mmmppph….mmmmmph…mmmmmph….mmmmph…


Ariel’s mind: I was SO close to escape from here? How could this happen? Eric, please help me!


Meanwhile, Prince Eric almost arrives at the old abandoned mansion, but Jetsam managed to hear Eric’s horse approaching so Flotsam and Jetsam prepare a trap for Eric so they can escape with Ariel. Flotsam and Jetsam have finished setting up their trap for the Prince meanwhile Eric has just arrived in front of the mansion and rushes inside, but keeps his guard up so he doesn’t fall for any of Flotsam’s and Jetsam’s traps. Once Eric is inside different traps start to go off and Eric manages to dodge them all, but he is knocked unconscious by Jetsam and Eric falls down. After that, Flotsam goes down to the basement unchains Ariel from her shackles ties her hands behind her back, ties her ankles together, throws her over his shoulder and carries her out. Ariel sees Eric unconscious she tries to call out to him but her gag was too tight to call for help. Flotsam and Jetsam grab their horses and ride away with Ariel deep into the forest and head to their second hideout the old abandoned castle.


(Approaching the old house)


Prince Eric: I’m almost there Ariel. Soon, I will free you and take you back home!


(Horse neighs)


Flotsam: The prince is approaching us!


Jetsam: We need to set a trap for him so we can escape!


Flotsam: Let’s get started!


(Flotsam and Jetsam set many traps all around the house and wait for the Prince to enter)


Jetsam: We’re done!


Flotsam: The Prince is here! Quick, hide!


(Flotsam and Jetsam hide as Eric arrives in front of the house)


Prince Eric: I need to be careful, Flotsam and Jetsam could have set traps in that big house!

(Runs up the stairs and throws open the door)


Prince Eric: It’s quiet! Too quiet!


(All the traps go off and Eric manages to dodge them all and continues his search for Ariel)


Prince Eric: Ariel! Ariel, where are you?


Jetsam: (Hits Eric unconscious with a club)


Prince Eric: UGH! UUHH…..


Flotsam: That was too close, he nearly found the girl!


Jetsam: Grab the girl and let’s go! We need to get out of here before the Prince wakes up!


Flotsam: Saddle up the horses while I get the girl!


(Flotsam runs down to the basement, unshackles Ariel and ties her hands behind her back and ankles together with strong rope.)


Flotsam: Hello princess, change of plans we need to move so you are coming with us!


Ariel: Mmmmph!


Flotsam: (unshackles Ariel and ties her up with strong rope)


Ariel: Mmmph….Mmmmphh…


Flotsam: No arguments you’re coming with me!


(Flotsam grabs Ariel and throws her over his shoulder like a sack of potatoes)


Ariel: Mmmmmphh…mmmmmmmmph…..


(As Flotsam carries Ariel out of the house she sees Eric unconscious and tries calling out to him)


Ariel: Mmmmmphhhh…Mmmmmphh…Mmmphhh….


Jetsam: Don’t bother calling him princess! Your Prince is now gone!


Ariel: (Whimpers against her gag) mmmmmmmmphhhhh….mmmph….mmph…mmmm….


Flotsam: Let’s head to our other hideout!


Jetsam: Quickly! Hang on princess!


Ariel: mmmmphhh….mmmmmmph…..


(Flotsam and Jetsam escape with Ariel once again and head to their second hideout)


2 hours had passed and Eric has regained consciousness, he remembered everything that happened including Ariel calling out to him. He grabs his sword and runs outside to look for clues on where Ariel might have been taken. Eric manages to find tracks; he jumps onto his horse and follows the tracks to Flotsam and Jetsam’s new hideout. Meanwhile, Flotsam and Jetsam have arrived at their second hideout an old abandoned castle they carry Ariel inside. Once they are inside they drag Ariel down to the castle dungeon, Jetsam opens one of the cells and Flotsam pushes her inside. After that, they grab some strong rope and tightly bound Ariel then they force Ariel to lie down on the bed while Jetsam ties Ariel’s ankles to the bed frame. Finally, Flotsam takes out a cloth and soaks it with a sleeping potion and clamps it over Ariel’s nose and mouth and soon she was fast asleep, but he left the cloth over Ariel’s nose and mouth so she doesn’t wake up any time soon. Afterwards, they lock Ariel in her cell and head back upstairs so await their next move.


Prince Eric: (wakes up) Uhhh, what happened? Wait, I remember everything! I was knocked unconscious by those eels and….Ariel! I heard her calling to me! I need to find her! (Runs outside)


Prince Eric: Oh no! I’m too late! They took Ariel away again! Wait, tracks heading east. I need to follow them! (Climbs onto his horse and follows the tracks) Hold on, Ariel!


(Meanwhile, Flotsam and Jetsam arrive at their second hideout and carry Ariel inside)

Castle

Flotsam: We’re here!


Jetsam: Let’s go mermaid!


Ariel: Mmmmph!


Flotsam: This castle is huge! I’m glad we found this place!


Jetsam: No one will find the girl here!


Ariel: MMmmmmph!


Flotsam: Let’s take her to the dungeon!


Jetsam: Great idea, no one will find her there!


Ariel: Mmmppph….mmmmmph….


(Flotsam and Jetsam force Ariel to move as they take her into the dungeon)


Flotsam: Move it, princess!


Jetsam: (Pulls Ariel’s hair hard to make her move)


Ariel: Mmmphhh….MMmmpppppphhh…..


(Once they arrive at the dungeon, Jetsam opens one of the cells while Flotsam pushes Ariel inside)


Flotsam: Open the cell!

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Jetsam: Welcome to your new room, girl!


Flotsam: Get inside! (Pushes Ariel)


Ariel: Mmmmph!


(After that, Flotsam and Jetsam grab more strong rope, force Ariel to lie down on the bed and bound her more tightly. Finally, they put Ariel to sleep by soaking a cloth with a sleeping potion and leave the cloth over her nose and mouth.)


Flotsam: You look tired princess, why don’t you take a rest!


Jetsam: (Pushes Ariel down on the bed)


Ariel: Mmmmmphhh…


(Flotsam ties more rope around Ariel’s chest while Jetsam ties Ariel’s legs with rope and ties her ankles to the bedpost.)


Flotsam: Grab the rope!


Jetsam: Here! Hold still, princess!


Ariel: Mmmmmphhhh….Mmmmmph….Mmmmph…mmmmphh….


Flotsam: There, that should hold you!


Jetsam: (Takes out a sleeping potion and soaks a cloth with it) you look like you could use a little nap, sweetheart!


(Jetsam clamps the cloth over Ariel’s nose and mouth and soon she was fast asleep)


Ariel: mmmmphhhh…mmmmmph….mmmph…mmphhh…


Jetsam: Don’t struggle…just breathe it in…..


Ariel: mmmph…..mmph…..mmmmm……..


(Jetsam leaves the cloth over Ariel’s face, leaves with Flotsam, locks Ariel in the cell and both go back upstairs.)


Jetsam: Now what?


Flotsam: We wait!


However, Eric had managed to make it to the second hideout and manages to sneak in through a window. Eric searches for Ariel quickly and quietly while getting rid of Flotsam and Jetsam at the same time by stabbing them with his sword. After Flotsam and Jetsam were gone Eric continued searching for Ariel and called out to her but due to the sleeping potion Ariel was still in a deep sleep and could not respond. Moreover, Prince Eric kept searching for Ariel until he reached the dungeon once Eric saw Ariel inside one of the cells he quickly unlocked the door, ran inside and untied Ariel from her restraints. He cradled Ariel in his arms, wrapped a blanket around her and carried Ariel out of the dungeon and back to Eric’s castle.


(Eric arrives at the abandoned castle and sneaks in through an open window)


Prince Eric: This castle is really old; I’ve got to find a way in without being seen. The window!

(Climbs inside) This time I won’t be outsmarted by those eels!


(Eric hears Jetsam down the hall and sneaks up behind him to execute him)


Jetsam: This was a great idea for a hideout!


Prince Eric: You think so, some of us feel differently


(Eric stabs Jetsam multiple times until Jetsam falls down to the ground permanently)


Flotsam: Jetsam, where are you? We need to plan our next move?


Prince Eric: I’m sorry, but your friend is a bit busy right now!


(Eric stabs Flotsam multiple times as well until he falls down to the ground permanently. After that, Eric continues searching for Ariel until he reaches the dungeon and sees Ariel locked inside one of the cells.)


Prince Eric: Ariel! Ariel, can you hear me? Ariel, please answer me!


(Eric searches the entire castle until he reaches the dungeon cells and sees Ariel)


Prince Eric: A dungeon? (Sees Ariel) Ariel!!


(Eric opens the door, runs inside the cell, and removes Ariel’s binds and gag)


Prince Eric: (Cradles Ariel in his arms) Ariel! Ariel, can you hear me? Ariel, please wake up!


Prince Eric: Don’t worry; I’m going to get you out of here!


(Eric wraps a blanket around Ariel and carries her out of the dungeon, out of the abandoned castle, and back to his castle.)


Ariel wakes up in her room with Eric sitting by her side. Eric explains everything that happened to her. Ariel and Eric embrace each other and fall asleep together. Ariel sighs in relieve that she is safe and back home with her Prince.


(The next morning Ariel wakes up in her room with Eric by her side)


Ariel: E- Eric?


Prince Eric: Ariel, are you alright?


Ariel: I’m fine! How did I get here?


Prince Eric: I found you unconscious in a dungeon cell; I carried you out of there and brought you back here!


Ariel: What about Flotsam and Jetsam?


Prince Eric: Both of them are gone! They can’t hurt you anymore!


Ariel: (Sighs) I’m so sorry!


Prince Eric: You’ve got nothing to be sorry for, Ariel!


Ariel: I thought they killed you!


Prince Eric: No, I was just knocked unconscious!


Ariel: I missed you so much!


Prince Eric: I missed you too. I love you!


Ariel: I love you too.


Prince Eric: I promise you that no will take you away from me ever again!


Ariel: I know you will!


(After that, Ariel and Eric fall asleep in each other’s arms. Ariel breathes sighs in relief that she is back home safe and sound with her Prince.)


The next day, Ariel and Prince Eric spend the whole day together and Ariel reunites her friends from the sea and Ariel and Eric live a long and happy life together.



The End

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In this story, I’m doing another twist on the Disney animated film The Little Mermaid. In this version, I wanted to try something different by writing about what would happen if Ursula’s eels Flotsam and Jetsam were brought back to life and were planning on continuing Ursula’s dirty work by getting their revenge on Princess Ariel and Prince Eric. What do Flotsam and Jetsam plan to do to Ariel and will Prince Eric be able to save Ariel in time? We’ll see!! For references, I plan on using Wrapped Up in the Moment by Burnup19, Ariel by SerisaBibi and Flotsam and Jetsam by Katharine – Elizabeth.


As we all know King Triton agreed to take Ariel's place as Ursula's prisoner, giving up his trident. Ariel is released as Triton transforms into a polyp and loses his authority over Atlantica. Ursula declares herself the Queen of the Seven Seas, but before she can use the trident, Eric intervenes with a harpoon. Ursula attempts to kill Eric, but Ariel intervenes, causing Ursula to inadvertently kill Flotsam and Jetsam. Enraged, Ursula uses the trident to grow to a monstrous size. Ariel and Eric reunite on the surface just before a gigantic Ursula separates them. She then gains full control of the entire ocean, creating a storm and bringing sunken ships to the surface. Just as Ursula is about to kill Ariel, Eric commandeers a wrecked ship and kills Ursula by impaling her in the abdomen with its splintered bowsprit. With Ursula dead, Triton and the other polyps in Ursula's garden revert to their original forms. Realizing that Ariel truly loves Eric, Triton willingly changes her from a mermaid into a human permanently and approves her marriage to Eric. Ariel and Eric marry on a ship and depart, with all of Ariel's friends and family watching them as well.


However, what we didn’t know is that when Ursula was defeated Flotsam and Jetsam were also brought back to life since Ursula’s dark magic was gone. After Ursula’s eels were reverted back they went to Ursula’s grotto and came up with their own plan to avenge Ursula and make Ariel and her Prince pay for what they did to Ursula. Using all of Ursula’s spells and potions Flotsam and Jetsam turned themselves into humans and plan to kidnap Ariel for ransom. The next day, Flotsam and Jetsam sneaked into the garden in Prince Eric’s castle and poured potions onto many plants that will grab Ariel.


(After Flotsam and Jetsam were resurrected they head to Ursula’s grotto)


Flotsam: Ursula is gone!


Jetsam: It’s all because of that princess and her prince! We need to avenge Ursula!


Flotsam: Let’s head back to Ursula’s grotto! We can use Ursula’s spell and potions to get our revenge on the girl!


Jetsam: Excellent Idea!


(Flotsam and Jetsam arrive at the grotto, grab many potions and come up with a perfect plan for their revenge.)


Flotsam: All of Ursula’s potions will be very useful to us!


Jetsam: I agree with all of her spells we can do anything we want!


Flotsam: In order to capture the princess, but first we need to turn ourselves into humans.


Jetsam: Then, we will sneak into the royal palace and use the potions on all the plants to grab the princess.


Flotsam: After that, we will make our getaway and we will leave the Prince a note saying that is he ever wants to see his beloved Princess again, he’ll do as we say!


Jetsam: But first we need to make all our preparations!


Flotsam: Correct!

Eels

(Flotsam and Jetsam throw a potion into a cauldron and turn themselves human. Once they reach the surface they find perfect hideouts to take Ariel after they kidnap her.) (Hint: I’m having Flotsam and Jetsam look exactly like Katharine-Elizabeth’s picture of Flotsam and Jetsam.)


Jetsam: We’re here! We need to find places to hide the princess, once we capture her!


Flotsam: Of course, but first…


(Flotsam throws another potion on the ground and two dark horses appear.)


Jetsam: Excellent, we will be able to escape quickly like this!


Flotsam: No time to waste! Let’s go!


Jetsam: Right!


(Flotsam and Jetsam ride out of the kingdom and find an old abandoned house. Later, they ride deep into the forest and find an old abandoned castle.)


Flotsam: This old house should be perfect!


Jetsam: We need another hideout, let’s head into the forest!


Flotsam: Look, an old castle!


Jetsam: This will also be a great place to hide!


(Once they have their hideouts, they ride back to Prince Eric castle sneak into the royal garden pour many potions onto all the plants.)


Flotsam: Let’s head to the Prince’s castle!


Jetsam: Let’s go!


Flotsam: There’s the garden we’ll sneak in through there!


Jetsam: Let’s use the potions on all the plants to grab the mermaid!


Flotsam: These vines up here should do nicely!


Jetsam: And the vines down here will also be really helpful!


Flotsam: We’re done; now let’s find a place to hide and wait until the princess comes!


(Flotsam and Jetsam hide in the garden and wait until Ariel arrives)


Meanwhile, Ariel and Eric have returned from their wedding reception Ariel decides to take a walk around the royal gardens while Eric went inside the castle to talk to Grimsby. However, Ariel's happy stroll through the gardens after her wedding was unexpectedly ended by some vines hanging from the trellis. The party was over, and Eric was in the castle, nobody was nearby to hear her brief cries for help before being bound and gagged by vines that wrapped around her mouth. They caught her from all sides. Her struggles were in vain as the vines continued to snake their way around her body, pulling her tightly into position. (Hint: I had Ariel bound and gagged exactly like burnup19’s Wrapped up in the Moment)


(Ariel and Eric just got off their wedding boat and Eric pulls Ariel into a deep passionate kiss)


Prince Eric: Ariel, I need to talk to Grimsby about a few things inside!


Ariel: I’ll be right there! I want to take a walk around the gardens!


Prince Eric: Okay, I’ll see you soon!


(Eric heads inside the castle while Ariel heads to the royal gardens)


Ariel: Wow, all these flowers are so pretty! It feels like I am in an enchanted forest! (Ariel Spins around happily)


(After some time Ariel prepares to head back inside, but the vines hanging from the trellis grabs Ariel and pulls her back and bound and gag her tightly.)


Ariel: It’s getting late; I better head back inside with Eric.


(Suddenly, vines wrap around Ariel’s wrists and pull her back)


Ariel: What? What’s happening?

Ariel

(Many other vines surround Ariel; Ariel tries to scream for help but is quickly gagged by the vines.)


Ariel: Hel…MMmmpphh….Mmmmph….Mmmmmmphhh…


(More vines tie around Ariel’s body and she continues to struggle in vain to free herself)


Ariel: Mmmmphhh….MMmpphhh….mmmphhh…..Mmmph….mmmmmph…..


Ariel’s mind: What’s going on? How is this happening?


Ariel: Mmmmphh….mmmphhh….


After that, Flotsam and Jetsam appeared in front of Ariel, Ariel shocked to see Flotsam and Jetsam still alive. Ariel continued to struggle in vain, but then a flower appeared in front of Ariel and sprayed her with sleeping powder putting Ariel into a deep sleep. Flotsam and Jetsam grab Ariel and take her away leaving a note and Ariel’s wedding veil on the ground for Prince Eric to find. Flotsam places Ariel onto his horse and they both ride away to their hideout.


Flotsam: Hello, Princess!


Jetsam: So glad to see you again!


Ariel: (shocked) Hmmph….Gmmmph….Hrrmph!


Flotsam: I’m sorry, but I’m afraid that your happy ending ends here!


Jetsam: You’re coming with us princess, whether you like it or not!


Ariel: Mmmppph…..mmmmmph….mmmmmph….mmmmph…


(A flower rises up to Ariel’s face and sprays her with sleeping powder)


Ariel: Mmmmphh….mmmph…mmmmm….


Flotsam: Grab the girl and let’s go!


Jetsam: Let’s leave her wedding veil along with the note we wrote for her Prince!


(Flotsam takes off Ariel’s wedding veil and leaves it on the ground with their note. After that, Flotsam and Jetsam ride away with Ariel to their first hideout.)


Flotsam: Good, now let head to our first hideout before anyone sees us!


Jetsam: Hold on tight, princess!


Ariel: (Couldn’t hear anything because she was in a deep sleep)


Flotsam and Jetsam: (Laugh sinisterly as they ride away to their hideout)


Flotsam and Jetsam arrive at an old abandoned mansion that was hidden far outside of the kingdom Jetsam carries Ariel inside lays her down on a bed and locks her inside the room. Meanwhile, back at Eric’s castle many hours had passed and Prince Eric was worried about Ariel. He heads out to the garden and finds Ariel’s wedding veil along with the note that Flotsam and Jetsam had left for him. Devastated from the news Prince Eric saddles up his horse, grabs his sword and rides out of the castle to look for Ariel.

Castle 2

Flotsam: We have arrived!


Jetsam: I just hope no one saw us escaping with the girl!


Flotsam: I doubt it! Everything was quiet giving us the perfect opportunity to escape!


Jetsam: I’ll take the girl inside!


Castle room 2

Flotsam: Put the girl in one of the bedrooms and lock her inside! We have to make sure she doesn’t escape us!


Jetsam: (Carries Ariel inside the house, opens one of the bedrooms, places her on the bed and locks Ariel in her room.) Sleep tight, princess! We are going to have so much fun together!


(Back at Prince Eric castle, Eric was starting to worry about Ariel)


Prince Eric: It’s getting so late; I wonder where Ariel could be.


Grimsby: I’m sure she is just enjoying herself, Eric!


Prince Eric: No, something is wrong! I need to check the garden!


(Eric quickly heads to the garden and finds Ariel’s wedding veil, along with Flotsam and Jetsam’s note!)


Prince Eric: Ariel! What is this? (Reads the letter) No! (Eric runs back inside the castle)

The note reads: Hello Prince Eric, remember us! You and your wife have taken Ursula from us and now we have taken something precious from you! If you ever want to see your beloved princess again, you will meet us at this exact location! See you soon, signed Flotsam and Jetsam!


Grimsby: Eric, what wrong?


Prince Eric: Ariel has been kidnapped!


Grimsby: What?


Prince Eric: She’s been taken by that sea monster’s eels! I have to go save Ariel! (Grabs his sword)


Grimsby: I’ll saddle up your horse!


Prince Eric: (Later, Eric gets on his horse and prepares to ride off)


Grimsby: Please be careful, Eric and come home safely!


Prince Eric: I will, but I am not going to give up until Ariel is safe and sound!


(Eric rides off out of the kingdom and to the abandoned house)


Prince Eric’s Mind: I’m coming Ariel! I’m coming to save you and if those eels get in my way, I will make sure they suffer for taking you!


Back at the abandoned mansion Ariel slowly starts to wake up. Once she has regained consciousness Ariel finds herself bound and gagged in strong vines, Ariel begins to struggle in vain to free herself from the vines but due to the potion that Flotsam and Jetsam poured on the vines they are too strong and Ariel can barely move an inch and the vines around her mouth were so tight that she could barely make any sound. Suddenly, Jetsam enters the room and removes the vines from Ariel’s mouth Ariel demands that Flotsam and Jetsam release her, but he refuses to listen and re-gags Ariel with the vines. Afterwards, Jetsam explains their plan to Ariel on how they plan to get rid of Prince Eric and make Ariel their prisoner forever. After he finishes he leaves the room and shuts the door. Ariel continues to struggle to free herself but it is no use her struggle is useless and dares to hope that Eric will find her before its too late.


Ariel: Mmmm….mmmm…mmmphhh….Mpphhh!!! Mmmph!!! MMmmmmmmph!!!


Jetsam: (Enters the room) Glad to see you are awake, princess!


Ariel: Mmmph….mmmphh….


Jetsam: You have something to say, princess!


Ariel: Mmmph…


Jetsam: (Removes the vines from Ariel’s vines)


Ariel: Why have you brought me here? Let me go!


Jetsam: Keep it quiet! (Clamps his hand over Ariel’s mouth)


Ariel: Mmmmph…


Jetsam: (Re-gags Ariel with the vines)


Ariel: Nmph….Mmmmmphhhh…Mmmmmphh…


Jetsam: That should keep you quiet! Now then, the reason we brought you here princess is that you and your Prince killed Ursula and we plan to continue her work by making you our prisoner forever!


Ariel: Mmmmph…Mmmmph…


Jetsam: As for your Prince we plan on getting rid of him!


Ariel: Mmmmphh…MMmmmmphhhh….


Jetsam: (Grabs Ariel’s face) after your Prince is gone, you will be ours forever and we will never let you go! You belong to us now whether you like it or not! (Gets up to leave)


Jetsam: I’ll see you later princess! Flotsam and I have preparations to make for when your Prince arrives! (Closes the door)


Ariel: (Tries to struggle in vain) mmmmmmmmphhhhh….mmmph…mmph…mmmm….


Ariel’s mind: Eric, please help me! Please don’t fall for Flotsam and Jetsam’s traps!


To Be Continued.............

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Over the next few days, Saleen has continued to make Aladdin fall more and more in love with her while Jasmine has been trapped underwater by being tied to a post, tied to a chair that was nailed to the ground, bound in rope while laying down next to Armand who pulled on her chain collar to prevent her from escaping and having Saleen change her clothes into different slave outfits. Meanwhile, Genie and their animal friends decide to spy on Saleen and follow her every move, that night they decide to follow Saleen as she is leaving the palace and they see her heading towards the ocean. There Genie uses his magic to make everyone breathe underwater and they follow Saleen back to her grove. Once there, they see Jasmine tied up as Saleen continues to taunt Jasmine over her success and they end up hearing that the only way to break the spell is for Aladdin to kiss Jasmine. Once Genie and the others now know what to do they swim back to the surface and come up with a plan to free Jasmine, break Saleen’s spell, and defeat Saleen and Armand once and for all.


Day 2:


Saleen: (Removes Jasmine’s blindfold) Today, I’m going to the marketplace with Aladdin! I’m so excited to spend more time with him! But don’t worry Princess you’ll be comfortable here until I get back!


(Saleen had just finished tying Jasmine to a post)


Jasmine: Mmmmppph….mmmmmph….MMmmmmph!


Saleen: Time to go, Armand please keep Jasmine Company!


Jasmine: Mmmphh….mmmph….


(Saleen leaves the ocean and meets Aladdin in the market place where they go shopping for matching outfits)


Day 3:


Saleen: You’ll never guess what I’m doing with Aladdin today princess! I’m having dinner with

him at the royal palace and then we’re going to dance in the ballroom under the moonlight.


Jasmine: MMmmphh….mmmphh…


Saleen: Oh, stop squirming, you’ll be fine!


(Finishes tying Jasmine tightly to a chair nailed to the ground)


Jasmine: Mmmphhh….MMmmpppppphhh…..


Saleen: I’ll see you tomorrow princess! (Leaves the ocean and heads to the palace)


Jasmine: Mmmmphh…MMmmmmphhhh…..


(Saleen has a good time with Aladdin and after dinner they dance on the balcony under the moonlight.)


Day 4:


Saleen: Oh Princess, today I’m going flying of Aladdin magic carpet I’ll get to see everything from the sky.


Jasmine: Mmmphhh…mmmphh….Mmmmmph….mmmmphhhh…..


(Saleen attaches the chain collar around Jasmine’s neck and gives the chain to Armand)


Saleen: Why do you keep making everything so difficult? Armand is here to keep you company and you get to see all the wonders of being underwater!


Jasmine: Mmmphhh….mmmmphhh….


Saleen: (sighs) Oh well, I’m off to spend more time with Aladdin! I’ll see you later tonight!


Jasmine: MMmmmmmphhhh…..


(Armand pulls of Jasmine’s chain)


Jasmine: Mmmmph!


Day 5:


Saleen: Oh Jasmine, how could I forget! When I went shopping at the marketplace I bought some outfits for you as well! Don’t worry I don’t need to untie you for this!


(Saleen uses her magic to change Jasmine’s clothes)


Jasmine: Mmmmmphh….Mmmmphhhh….


Saleen: No, too glitzy!


Jasmine: Mmmmm….


Saleen: No, too many ruffles!


Jasmine: Mmmmph….


Saleen: Nope, too flowery


Jasmine: MMmmmmph….


Saleen: No, too much volume!


Jasmine: MMmmmmph!


Saleen: Perfect!


(Saleen chose a long red seductive dress)


Jasmine: Mmmmphh…MMmmmmphhhh…..


Saleen: Oops, oh look at the time! It’s time for me to go see Aladdin! This time, I’m spending the night at the palace! I can’t wait! I’ll see you tomorrow, princess!


Jasmine: Mmmmmmmmphhhhh…..mmmph…mmph….mmmm….


(Meanwhile back at the palace Genie, Iago, Abu, and Rajah keep searching for Jasmine until Saleen arrives)


Genie: Any sign of Jasmine?


Iago: Nope!


Abu: (sadly) No….


Rajah: (Whimpers)


Genie: We have to keep looking, if we can just….


(Saleen arrives)


Iago: We need to stop that mermaid before things get any worse!


Abu: (Agrees)


Rajah: (Snarls)


Genie: Wait a minute, all of these changes seemed to happen ever since she came to the palace!


Iago: You’re right! I think if we follow her every move we’ll find the princess!


Abu: (Oooo…)


Rajah: (Smiles)


Genie: Okay, once she leaves the palace we’ll find out where she goes!


Iago: Great!


Abu: (Chitters excitedly)


Rajah: (Nods in agreement)


(In the morning, Saleen leaves and heads back to the ocean. Genie, Iago, Abu, and Rajah, follow her without being seen.)


Saleen: Bye Aladdin, I’ll see you later!


Genie: She’s leaving, now let’s follow her!


Iago: We have to be careful that she doesn’t see us!


Abu: Uh-huh!


(They follow Saleen to the ocean and once she goes underwater, Genie uses his magic to make everyone breathe underwater and they continue to follow Saleen to her cove. Once they arrive Genie immediately see’s Jasmine while Iago hears Saleen tell Jasmine how to break the spell.)


Iago: She’s gone underwater! How are we going to follow her now?


Genie: Everyone hold on, because we are going in!


(Genie creates a big air bubble and they continue to follow Saleen to her cove)


Iago: What is this place?


Genie: Everyone look!


(They all see Jasmine bound and gagged next to Armand)


Genie: We’ve got to get Jasmine out of here!


Iago: Wait, listen!


Saleen: Oh Jasmine, if only you could see how much fun Aladdin and I are having.


Jasmine: Mmmmph….Mmmmmmphhh….


Saleen: Just give up princess! There is no way for you to escape or break my spell! The only way to break my spell is if Aladdin kisses you, but that will never happen. Since you are trapped down here! (Laughs at Jasmine)


Iago: That’s it! That how we free her!


Abu: Huh?


Rajah: Huh?


Genie: We need to free Jasmine from here and take her to Aladdin! That will break the spell!


Iago: Let’s get out of here quick before she sees us!


Genie: Don’t worry Jasmine! Help is on the way!


(They all head back to the surface and come up with the perfect plan.)


Genie: So tomorrow when Saleen leaves the ocean. I will go into the cove and free Jasmine then we’ll come back to the palace and free Aladdin from the spell. In the meantime, the rest of you will keep Saleen distracted while I bring Jasmine to Aladdin.


Iago: Got it!


Abu and Rajah: (Nod in agreement)


Genie: Okay, so tomorrow we’ll be ready!


The next day, Genie, Abu, Iago, and Rajah put their plan into motion by having their animal friends throw a bunch of food and objects at Saleen and tell Aladdin the truth while Genie goes to Saleen cove, rescues Jasmine and brings her back to the palace. Once Genie brings Jasmine back to the palace Aladdin immediately recognizes her and walks towards Jasmine, Saleen tries to tell Aladdin to stop but continues to get hit by more food and objects. Aladdin cups Jasmine’s face and kisses her which immediately breaks Saleen’s spell and Saleen is transported back to the ocean.


(The next morning, Saleen arrives at the palace ready to spend more time with Aladdin, but Genie, Abu, Iago, and Rajah put their plan into motion by throwing different types of food and objects at Saleen while Genie heads to the ocean to free Jasmine.)


Saleen: Hello, Aladdin!


Aladdin: Hi Saleen, What do you want to do today?


Saleen: Oh, I don’t know surprise me!


Abu: (Dumps a bucket of hot water on Saleen and put the bucket on her head.)


Iago: Surprise!


Rajah: (Tackles Saleen to the Ground)


Genie: (Flies out of the palace and heads into the ocean to Saleen’s cove)


Aladdin: Guys, what are you doing?


Iago: Al, you need to snap out of it! This girl has brainwashed you!


Aladdin: What?


Abu: (Throws many types of food at Saleen)


Rajah: (Knocks many objects toward Saleen)


(Meanwhile in the ocean, Genie has arrived at Saleen’s cove and manages to sneak in trap Armand, frees Jasmine and flies her back to the palace.)


Genie: (Looks inside thru a window) Don’t worry Jasmine! I’ll get you out of here!


Jasmine: Mmmmmphhhh….Mmmmmphh…Mmmphhh….


Genie: (Sneaks in and traps Armand) Aha! I’ve got you, you terrible Octopus! This should hold you! (Ties Armand’s tentacles together and locks him in a steel cage.)


Jasmine: Mmmmph! Mmmmph!


Genie: Don’t worry, princess! I’ll get you out of here in no time!


(Genie frees Jasmine from her gag and restraints, picks her up and flies her out of the cove and to the surface.)


Jasmine: Thank you, Genie!


Genie: No problem! But we have to hurry and get you back to the palace!


(Genie puts Jasmine onto his back and flies back to the palace. Back inside Iago, Abu, and Rajah continue to distract Saleen.)


Saleen: Stop that this instance!


Iago: I don’t think so!


Aladdin: Why are guys acting so weird?


Iago: You need to fight her spell Al, you are not thinking straight!


Aladdin: I don’t know what is going on?


(Genie arrives with Jasmine)


Genie: Hurry Jasmine! Run to Aladdin!


Saleen: What? NO!


Genie: (Trips Saleen)


Jasmine: Aladdin!


Aladdin: Huh? Wait a minute, I know you!


Jasmine: Aladdin, it’s me Jasmine!


Aladdin: I don’t remember much, but I know that what I need to do is right!


(Aladdin cups Jasmine’s face and kisses her. After that, Saleen is transported back to her cove and her spell is broken.)


Aladdin remembers everything and embraces Jasmine then Genie uses his magic to trap Saleen and Armand in their own prison cell which they can never escape from no matter how strong Saleen’s magic is.


Aladdin: Hey, I remember everything!


Jasmine: Aladdin!


Aladdin: Jasmine, I’m so sorry!


Jasmine: It’s not your fault. This was all Saleen’s doing!


Aladdin: Guys, I’m sorry as well for how I was behaving!


Genie: It’s okay Al! We knew that you were behaving strangely and that what we intended to figure out because your weren’t behaving like yourself.


Aladdin: I remember every single detail, but there was nothing I could do to stop myself!


Jasmine: Saleen’s magic was strong. She made me her prisoner; I couldn’t escape no matter how hard I tried.


(Aladdin embraces Jasmine and never lets her go)


Genie: Why don’t the two of you go relax? We’ll clean up around here!


Aladdin: Alright!


(Aladdin and Jasmine leave the room and Genie flies back to the ocean to trap Saleen and Armand.)


Saleen: (Screaming) how did this happen? Everything was just fine, Aladdin was mine! What went wrong?


Genie: I believe I can help with that!


(Genie uses his magic traps Saleen and Armand in one of the dungeon cells with no way out, no matter how strong Saleen’s magic is.)


Saleen: No!


Genie: There that should hold the two of you for a very long time so you don’t cause any more trouble for us!


Saleen: Let me out of here!


Genie: Nope, not going to happen! Goodbye!


(Genie leaves the cove and heads back to his friends. As for Saleen and Armand they were trapped in their dungeon cell forever never to be seen or cause trouble again. )


Back at the palace Aladdin and Jasmine thank their friends once again for saving them and they all decide to go on a tropical vacation. Aladdin and Jasmine have been reunited and promise to never let anyone separate them every again.



The End

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